tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4586198157171342724.post2347390911918022789..comments2019-01-24T12:25:10.801+13:00Comments on Fasi : The last Friday of my holidaysGlenbrae Blogshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16371474947404269992noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4586198157171342724.post-77478203504485696932017-02-21T10:37:37.468+13:002017-02-21T10:37:37.468+13:00hi my name is Tasman i am a year 8 at blaketown sc...hi my name is Tasman i am a year 8 at blaketown school i like how you used detail but i think you could use a little bit more punchuation and in your story it say we drank three big bottles and what type of bottles.Tasmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07109057631425431684noreply@blogger.com