Wednesday, 11 July 2018


On Sunday my family and I went to church and my Grandparents house. In the morning I got dressed for church and the rest of the family.  Then we left home and we drove to our church near the city.  After Church we went to my grandparents house.  When we got to my  Grandma and Grandpa house we said hello and gave them a great big hug.  We helped prepare breakfast, with my Grandma.  My Dad was talking to my Grandpa asking what did they do during the week.  When the food was ready we all sat down and had breakfast.  After breakfast we cleared the table and I went to watch tv with my Grandpa, dad and little brother.  The movie we watched was called Noah, about God who sends a flood to wash all the bad things in the world and tells Noah to build an Ark. An Ark is like a huge boat Noah built to save all the animals and some people. My Grandma and mum were cooking in the kitchen.  When the food was ready we all had lunch together.  After lunch we helped clear the dishes, we got ready to go back home.   We came home and it was dark and we had a rest.

Thursday, 28 June 2018

The Dark world

One weird night I wake up and look out my window and see a man standing randomly on the dark quiet street. So I decide to walk down stairs, open the door to see if the man is ok, but by the time I open the door, the man is next to a puddle then I ran to the man and yell out to the man “ARE YOU OK”, then the man whispers “no” then he jumps through the puddle into this dark world.

I just look down at the puddle and jump on it, but I never went through it I just splashed the water everywhere. So I ran as fast as I can back to the house and slam the door, then ran back up stairs to my room  and force myself to sleep.

The next day I wake up and walk down stairs to the kitchen and cook myself some breakfast. I realised  that the bread is finished. So I drive to the shop to get some bread. When I make it to the bread section I look at the window and see the man who was the street last night and smiles at me and says “jump into the puddle tonight. Then I freaked out and drove back home and waited till the night.

After I waited I looked out my window and saw`the man then he whispered on phone “jump down here”, then he jumped into the puddle so I popped on my shoes, jacket and ran down stairs opened the door and ran to the puddle and then jumped as high as I could and fell  through the puddle and saw nothing but darkness I said “where am l” then he said “this is YOUR World now, this is the dark world where one million people died and suffered”. (to be continued)

Friday, 22 June 2018

Argument Writing. Fenchurch Liquor store.

Dear Morris

Talofa my name is Fasi and I am a student at Glenbrae School. I am writing this letter about your liquor store which I believe is a problem for the community.

My opinion is to close down the Fenchurch Liquor store because it is beginning to be a problem in the Glen Innes community. Tamaki College students are always around your store and they could be coming to buy alcohol. The students can use their lunch money to buy alcohol instead of buying food. When college students drink, they will not be able to focus on their learning.

The Fenchurch Liquor store should be shut down from Taniwha street because people will come and buy a whole box for themself and drink it on the street. When these people get drunk they will be causing arguments and fights on the streets. I believe not all your customers are sensible drinkers.

The store is also right next to family homes. Because it is so close to homes adults will be able to keep buying alcohol and becoming more drunk. The families will also be spending a lot of money on drinking and not on the food for kids.

Morris I hope you think about these arguments and think of the community which we live in.

Yours sincerely

Wednesday, 9 May 2018


Wednesday 9 May there were 6 volunteers from the P.W.C (Prize Water Cooper), the 6 volunteers came to tell us about Toitoi and how you can draw a picture and make a story of it.(E.g Sky Dive. I look at the ground I feel the wind. I jump off a sudden strike of lighting rushes though my body.) 

Our class got split up into six groups, the only person I knew out of those volunteer was Lee because he was the person to work with us. We went outside and followed Lee up on the field. Then we sat and read 3 poems Cats, Poppy and The Whistle Blow.

The first poem we read was about cat's it just talked about what cats do like crawling scratching rolling, and the next poem was Poppy it talked about how red it is like red velvet, and the very last one was Whistle Blow, that one talked about rugby when the whistle Blows and the game starts, every starts running pushing to the end and get the try then the whistle Blows.      

Monday, 7 May 2018

The Teddy that lives on the mountain

One evening there was one boy name Tommy playing with favorite racing cars, Tommy is only 7 year old, he lives with his Dad and his Mom, he has no siblings.  Tommy favorite place to go was on the mountain, because Tommy had a little secret about why he loves going to the mountain. And that little secret was because he had friend named Joe who lived on the mountain, and his friend wasn't a human or a creature that lurks in the night but he was a teddy bear and small one the only time the teddy bear awakens is in the evening when sun falls and all that is there is quietness.

“It’s time to go to the mountain Mom and Dad” Tommy said putting on his jacket “ok lets go then ” dad replied with a face full of joy. Then they drove to the Mountain.
When they arrived they Tommy got out of the car and ran to a little hole in the ground then he whispered in the hole “you can come out now Joe”, the a little teddy popped out.
The teddy just looked around and suddenly ran to the edge of the mountain and said “you can live with me” then Tommy said “how?...” then Joe said “you need to jump off the mountain and then you can see me and then live with me” Tommy said with a nervous voice “i'm scared”, don’t be I can jump with you replied Joe” “ok” and then they both jumped off the edge and died.

Then Mom and Dad just watched him fall and said “good job Joe 3 more kids to kill” till we can live as a family in a little hole.

I was always there

One beautiful day this boy named Jimmy woke up and looked at the blue sky and tried to look at the shiney yellow sun but it was too bright. Then he thought in his mind I miss Dad I hope we find him one day. He walked out of his room went to his mom room and said to her “can please make me some breakfast” “yes dear” mom replied feeling happy, “what kind of food do you want Jimmy “um? I want eggs on toast”  “ok”, then they both walked out of the room and started to make their breakfast, then mom quickly started making the eggs on toast.

After making the eggs on toast and eating it they wanted to go outside for a walk into the bush. Then they started to walk into the bush the first thing Jimmy saw was a tree with green leaves and a nest filled with baby birds, mom just looked everywhere.
They both looked everywhere well they walk through the bush then mom started talking to someone about Jimmy grades, then Jimmy looked to where mom was talking to and he saw no one there but tree and thing that are always in the bush. Then Jimmy said to mom “who are you talking too” “don't be silly Jimmy you already know who i'm talking too” said mom.
Jimmy said nothing and just continued  back until they got home.

After a long walk back home Jimmy went straight to the shower, after showering he went to bed because he felt tired.
After sleeping for 5 hours he saw dad and he felt so happy that he slapped his face to make sure that he wasn't dreaming then dad stopped him and said  “why are you so happy?’ “because your here” Jimmy said with a loud voice “ uhhh what?” “I was always there Jimmy?, remember I was talking to mom when we were walking in the bush” “oh yea I remember” Jimmy said with a voice that was freaked out? Then Jimmy just went back to his room and said I never knew he was always there?.

Monday, 30 April 2018

A fact about Pluto

Pluto is not a planet because it is small, people started to notice that Pluto is very small and and some asteroid are the same size or even bigger than Pluto. Pluto is known as a dwarf planet.